Fifteen thousand soldiers?! And that's not enough?! Holy crow! How big of an army has Bäldassare got?! A massive one apparently!

I love how you started this chapter from the lion's point of view. I was a little confused at first, because it didn't connect with the end of the last chapter, but I understood it fine once I got into it.

Please keep writing!

Why did she leave her things in that cave? Isn't that a little risky? Who knows when she'll return? The book and pen especially! Isn't she supposed to keep those close so that no one else can use the power? Unless she's the only one that can do it...
So, now she's after a special lion. Probably guarding/protecting the oracle. Why else would it be there?

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The leaders of every island are all pretty nice, huh? They all take the group in with quite a bit of kindness. Wow! No mean people or anything!
Creepy man in the dark room. Any reference to who he might be? I was a little confused there. Is he with Raphael's group? A random stranger?
Uh oh! Bäldassare's on the islands! How the heck did he find the Lost Isles so easily, when Cara's group found them by accident? And, the rest of Lerien'yth can't even find them, because they're LOST! How does he find them so easily?!

Keep writing!

O... of course the fortune teller's on the SEVENTH island. Of course. The island which Cara is to be wary of. Btw, did you happen to get the idea of the scene with the rice farmers in ankle deep water from Mulan? When I read it, it just immediately reminded me of that.

Anyways,

Keep on writin'!

Ooh... love troubles... Kade and Kip are almost the same person, considering Kip is based off of Kade; I can't even imagine the dilemma Cara must be in right now! Poor Cara, so many things going on in her life...

Please keep writing!

Oh... lovely hot springs! Must feel so nice!

Cara collapsing again... can't blame her though. The smell must've been unbearable!

Hmm... even Cara ws suspicious of Caius! Well, anyway... great chapter!

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Wha-oh! Gladiator games! I hope people won't be killing each other!

Oh. Carien`yth... I wonder where she is... I don't remember Cara's age, but I'm thinking she's around 17 now. Her name is so close, it makes you wonder...

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Poor Cara. I wonder what happened? It's good that she'll be better now, but it's kind of mysterious... She just randomly collapsed... At least she's better now.

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... I really don't know what to say about this one. Everything seems so tense in Cara's life right now; nothing is calm. Lots of unrest. Bäldassare keeps attacking her in her dreams... I wonder what'll happen next! Caius is way to cheerful to not be suspicious... something's gotta be up with that guy.

I know the next chapter's already up, but anyways,

Please keep writing!

Lol. Caius is so funny! Quite upbeat isn't he? Considering his island is littered with garbage, that's kind of hard to believe. I think he just ignores it. Maybe he's hiding something, or then again, he could just be a very happy person! I don't know... he seems fishy to me. But I like to suspect everyone. Well anyways...

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Ah! Bäldassare finally makes an appearance! In her dreams, but he made an appearance! Yahoo! Kinda creepy! That guy is truly evil! How did someone like him ever get in control?!

Oh... seven guides, I wonder if they will be switching guides every once and a while, and get to the seventh...! That spells trouble for Cara, what with her creepy dream and all! AH! So suspenseful!

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Hmm. A relaxing chapter. I wonder when Kip is going to run into Bäldassare... At least they're having peaceful times right now...

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Suspenseful... talk about foreshadowing. Sounds like Cara isn't going to be out of the water for a long time. She's got a lot of hard times ahead of her. That fortune teller sounded kind of creepy! I wonder if she's working for someone... I can't wait to hear what happens next!

Please keep writing!

O... the Lost Isles... They sound pretty cool! Especially with all the hard to pronounce names they have! I gotta know what happens while the group is on them! I noticed that you haven't updated since like November! Please write more! I want to know what happens next!

This is so cool! You definitly have talent! I see your spellcheck has gotten better as well! I don't think that there were hardy any errors in this chapter! Well done! Please write more chapters!