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| Shadows in the Fire 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseO, I like it so much. It's amazingly well-written. |
| dollface and her cancer 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abusethe simplicity of this is what makes it resounding, and terrifying. |
| Miz E. Mak 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abusepowerful and short. you've got more than a knack for poetry. it's a gift. write on. |
| simpleplan13 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. its short and sweet... well done |
| Tytherpol 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abusei love the choppiness of these words and, though this is short, the picture painted is crazy and almost too real. i kept twisting the words, so i had to read this about five times but it's good. |
| Chidaruma Kamisori 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It makes me think of the boy I like. |
| HauntedMisery 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseShort and beautiful =] |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It's so very simple, but that's what makes it beautiful. "eyeliner boy-Man." What a gorgeous image. Keep writing! :) |
| Indigo Carmine 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseGod, why didn't I review this? I love it. I know girls like this. I see them and my heart goes out to them but y'know, there's this feeling like... as much as I'd want to help them... I'd end up making them sad too and then it would be time for me to go. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuse"this eyeliner boy-Man" that line made me giggle ... and i don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. |
| not sure yet 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseshort and strong, mucho enjoyable, and definitely excellent enough said |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseShort and very gorgeous. It's quite heavy at the last two lines, but overall it's quite light and fun to read. -C.N |
| painting andromeda 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was fun to read. It proves that short pieces can carry emotion and meaning. Nice feat. Stay well, Stephen |
| cocaine and cherries 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseaw. |
| dancingintherain 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI love your choice of words esp. the combination of "pretty & sad" and "eyeliner boy-man", nice poem :) |