Short and simple. Beautifully written!

O, I like it so much. It's amazingly well-written.

the simplicity of this is what makes it resounding, and terrifying.

powerful and short. you've got more than a knack for poetry. it's a gift. write on.

I like this.. its short and sweet... well done

i love the choppiness of these words
and, though this is short, the picture painted is crazy
and almost too real.
i kept twisting the words, so i had to read this about five times
but it's good.

I love it.

It makes me think of the boy I like.

Short and beautiful =]

I love it. It's so very simple, but that's what makes it beautiful. "eyeliner boy-Man." What a gorgeous image. Keep writing! :)

God, why didn't I review this?

I love it. I know girls like this. I see them and my heart goes out to them but y'know, there's this feeling like... as much as I'd want to help them... I'd end up making them sad too and then it would be time for me to go.

"this eyeliner boy-Man"

that line made me giggle ... and i don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing.

short and strong, mucho enjoyable, and definitely excellent

enough said

Short and very gorgeous. It's quite heavy at the last two lines, but overall it's quite light and fun to read.

-C.N

This was fun to read. It proves that short pieces can carry emotion and meaning. Nice feat.


Stay well,
Stephen

aw.