Reviews for The Biography of Benjamin Conway

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storyofagirl ox 2008-08-15 ch 1,	abuseomg this is a really good story. i like it ALOT. i read all 11 chapters (: good job on this one. p.s. i just relaeased my new story called " letting go", i hope you check it out sometime.
notwithoutyou 2008-06-19 ch 11,	abuseOh no. I wonder what Rachel will do. Ben needs to make amends with her soon, he needs her! Please update as soon as possible. Also, I think instead of writing in brackets, you should type it out so it makes sense and fits into the paragraph. Because the brackets are really distracting and quite confusing. Just a tip. Wonderful plot.
Lea 2008-05-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseI liked the first chapter a lot. Then, I read this chapter and have up half way through after reading what seems like a thousand "Mr.I don't give a ** blah blah blah." Please, for god's sake. Tell me this man's real name. And then use it!
angel1357 2008-05-22 ch 11,	abuseIt's alive! Your alive! I know I've done this to you before but it makes me very happy to see! Anyways, so.. his... mom.. died? How horrible! He really has some problems now, doesn't he? sighs poor Benjamin Conway. He's gotta huge task before him... update soon!
gummybearmurder 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abuseI lyk this chapter alot.
angel1357 2008-05-06 ch 10,	abuseIt's alive! You're alive! A miracle I tell you! Anyways, I seem to be falling into deeper confusion over this story, but I think that's the idea. Some stuff I'm sure is being explained, but I've got visions of chemistry equations dancing through my head. Either way, it was well written (as usual, do I ever say anything else?) and I'm happy SOMETHING is happening with it!
Essie 2008-03-08 ch 9, anon.	abuseLovely camaraderie. I love the sort of friendship ring the guys have - though they are a bit sadistic to each other at times. Anyway, i found this chapter funny in parts (which is what i hope you were aiming for). Angry nerd gets beat up by unlabelled Benjamin Conway with commentary by Vincent and Seth (who has a very rythmic name) and snickers galore. I mean that type of humour is just golden.
masterful me 2008-01-30 ch 1,	abuseOh, that last line is just great. It wraps up this whole first chapter/introduction very nicely. The summary drew me in (I'm in love with rebels, sadly). Well I just wanted to let you know I'm reading! Nice job.
angel1357 2008-01-30 ch 9,	abuseO.O that was interesting. Though.. you've actually gotten quite far in this story! I wonder why one-two days after I post on my rant about nobody posting, all the sudden, I'm getting a flood of stories to read. Anyways, that was pretty good. I've been wondering where you disappeared to. I'm finding the paranthesis and italics really nice, it's an obvious witch of POV which is nice to have. And also that means you're not keeping secret what Benjamin Conway is really feeling. Update soon!!
Jack Argyle 2007-12-12 ch 8,	abuseSorry about this delayed review. My trip went longer than the six days we had planned and we travelled a couple of hundred more kilometres than we were expecting to travel. Pretty much we just travelled north until we hit water. Thus is the mentality of five young males. Onto your chapter though. Short and much darker than the previous entries. But there was a small, undeniable Napoleon Dynamite reference there to break the bleakness. Here's hoping that Benjamin's depression won't last too long. You hate to see a good man down for to long.
i'llxkeepwaitingx3 2007-12-01 ch 8,	abuseah! love it! It's written very uniquely, the style. I figured that Rachel would come visit Benjamin after his long absence from school, but you totally surprised me. update soon!
emotionless-stares 2007-12-01 ch 3,	abusekinda confusing but it's good. This is in third narrative right?
emotionless-stares 2007-12-01 ch 2,	abusehuh...interesting friendship
emotionless-stares 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseLol, I like him
Georgianna 2007-12-01 ch 8,	abuseNO BENJAMIN! I love him and I adore how it is written, am dying to know what Rachel actually did, and hate Tiffany with a passion. :)

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