 Autumn Reflections 2007-10-08 . chapter 1The last four lines are my favourite, they are really powerful. I guess it is just our luck to be how your poem describes, there is no way to help it either, unless you are perfect. Being alone sucks. I hope everything is okay for you :)
Nice work, maybe work on the punctuation a bit more (I need to do that with my stuff...sucks so much) and keep writing!
-A.R
(Maybe check out my new story, The Evelenne Project, of you are interested? Or my NEW poems, the old ones are weird... |