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Belong to None 2007-10-15 . chapter 1
I'm confused... is this about me?
Summerdazed 2007-10-08 . chapter 1
wow, a lot of questions powerfully asked, all of which the answers may never be found. nice read though, keep writing!
=summerdazed=
Autumn Reflections 2007-10-08 . chapter 1
The last four lines are my favourite, they are really powerful. I guess it is just our luck to be how your poem describes, there is no way to help it either, unless you are perfect. Being alone sucks. I hope everything is okay for you :)

Nice work, maybe work on the punctuation a bit more (I need to do that with my stuff...sucks so much) and keep writing!

-A.R

(Maybe check out my new story, The Evelenne Project, of you are interested? Or my NEW poems, the old ones are weird...
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