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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-13 ch 1,  | abuseGood poem. Cigarette smoke is a unique topic/whatever you want to call it. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| daniel 2007-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseagreed |
| painting andromeda 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis poem depicts/employs my exact feelings about (most of) the female race. AH!(mazing)! as always I love you! Stephen |
| hey maria 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like the rhyming and the theme of smoke. Good job. |
| X-claustrophobia-x 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseUsually I'd enforce the guidelines (use proper textual formatting), but this wouldn't be nearly as beautiful if you went back and capitalized. Some people can pull it off. You did well ;) |