with every new poem i read of yours, my jaw drops lower and lower. seriously, i envy your talent!

adding you to my favorites.

Good poem.

Cigarette smoke is a unique topic/whatever you want to call it.

~Twilight Starr~

agreed

This poem depicts/employs my exact feelings about (most of) the female race. AH!(mazing)! as always


I love you!
Stephen

I really like the rhyming and the theme of smoke. Good job.

Usually I'd enforce the guidelines (use proper textual formatting), but this wouldn't be nearly as beautiful if you went back and capitalized. Some people can pull it off. You did well ;)