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| M.T. Chambers 2007-10-08 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a good poem, with a nice flow to it. The only line that seems a little out of place to me is the third to last (war is just a game), I might switch it with the line just after it...But very nice otherwise |
| BonnieDoll 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI suppose that's actually quite an accurate view of war... beautiful poetry, anyway... ^_^ |
| fatbird33 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abusewow, i really liked it. It flowed so nicely. good work |