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| Luna Turner 2007-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseOh God. It's not fair! I want your writing! WAH! Just kidding. Cheers! ~Kat |
| EternallyImperfect 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseI love they way you wrote this. It's confusing with a subtle touch of weird, but that fits the theme nicely. It also has a soft, pleasant flow. My opinion-It's a nice but strange poem. A fine piece of art. It's more prose than poetry, though. ~Imperfect |
| Arafax 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting way to describe a mental breakdown. Very nice job on this. Well written and to the point. ~Arafax~ |