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| fictionaldocumentary 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseheyy~ this story seems quite promising! the blonde guy seems pretty hot ;) hehe. i really like the way you describe things--sophisticated without being pretentious, and very detailed at the same time. anyhow, i hope youre gonna continue this soon~! && in response to your reviews...firstly, thanks so much for reviewing!! ^.^ as for why my stuff is usually depressing...well...im not sure why, actually. maybe its because i never have had any luck in love haha. and yes, how to hear a heart break is a second person version of endless...originally they were supposed to be one, but then i wanted to put the focus on Luke instead of Duke. and i made Duke a little less likable..cuz the fic is actually based on my unfortunate experience. haha. except for most of the sappy love parts with Luke didnt happen (unfortunately > |
| wolfsbaneX13 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is great so far. You're writing is excellent. What stuck out the most to me is how you were able to put all the detail in, but it was still not too much and easy to read (one of my favorite writing qualities). The story idea looks promising and full of potential. A famous bachelor and a professional dancer? It's a very good idea, very interesting; I like it. Great start to the story. I'd love to see more :] |