Please continue with this...? =P pls!

i don't quite understand the fantasy aspect of the story. Why is it dark?

Very interesting chapter I must say. I thought that the ending was very funny when he fainted at the blood.
Though I was wondering something, your story is under the Romance/Fantasy genre...I was wondering why you had put it under the 'Fantasy' genre?
Loved the story, update soon!

An interesting end to this chapter. I wonder what will happen when Spence wakes up,lol.

Another wonderful chapter! I'm really getting into this story

An interesting story. It's nice to see someone who writes shounen-ai (I'm a fellow author of that genre myself) This is also seems to be a GOOD shounen-ai which is hard to come by around here.

I do encourage you to keep up the good work.

Perhaps, if you have the time feel free to read some of my works (especially Sacrifice. It's my most popular shounen-ai)

I love this story!! ^-^
Armstrong's awesome, lol...
And Blaine's pretty cute.
If I were the thugs, I'd have... uh... >_>
YOU KNOW! LMFAO! XD
Is there gonna be more? Is there? Is there? I LOVE THIS!
^_^

This is an interesting beginning. Can't wait to see what's going to happen in upcoming chapters.