 Pyrgus 2007-11-19 . chapter 1I like this, but the rhyming seems like it was something you wanted to incoorporate, not something that just really fit.
muchlove!
Pyrgus! |
 Needa S 2007-11-17 . chapter 1Good friends are awesome and so is your poem. Write on and God Bless. |
 Laura Schiller 2007-10-19 . chapter 1The feelings in it are great...but the rhymes sound forced. I like it though, you sound like a good friend. |
 September's-Rose 2007-10-09 . chapter 1I love that line; I'm still laughing at it.
Do I sense some "subliminal messages" to a few friends of yours? Are you trying to tell them something? Perhaps you are wanting to teach them a lesson, eh? ( |