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| Pyrgus 2007-11-19 ch 1,  | abuseI like this, but the rhyming seems like it was something you wanted to incoorporate, not something that just really fit. muchlove! Pyrgus! |
| Needa S 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseGood friends are awesome and so is your poem. Write on and God Bless. |
| Laura Schiller 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThe feelings in it are great...but the rhymes sound forced. I like it though, you sound like a good friend. |
| September's-Rose 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI love that line; I'm still laughing at it. Do I sense some "subliminal messages" to a few friends of yours? Are you trying to tell them something? Perhaps you are wanting to teach them a lesson, eh? ( |