I like this, but the rhyming seems like it was something you wanted to incoorporate, not something that just really fit.

muchlove!
Pyrgus!

Good friends are awesome and so is your poem. Write on and God Bless.

The feelings in it are great...but the rhymes sound forced. I like it though, you sound like a good friend.

I love that line; I'm still laughing at it.
Do I sense some "subliminal messages" to a few friends of yours? Are you trying to tell them something? Perhaps you are wanting to teach them a lesson, eh? (