WOW!

That sounds almost like it could be developed into a song! Very nice. I like how it changes half-way through. It's upsetting and depressing but then powerful and revitalizing! NICE!

O man..i gotta find something i dont like...hm...this is hard...um...how about...I want more! LOL...thats all i can come up with! It was THAT good! :)

L

nice. :)

Wow. Very well-written and powerful.

You have a gift with words.

Krystel