Reviews for One Sunday Morning

Dr. Dreyyy 2007-10-09 ch 1,	abuseh o r r e n d o u s h o r r e n d o u s h o r r e n d o u s o This story really sucks lol. Give up writing. u r u u u u c r c c c c k i k k k k s b s s s s u l c e k suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck suck
i_kiss_to_tell 2007-10-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseso i pretty much luved this... it was so...clipped and abrupt and almost feeling less with its narration, kinda jst lyk a list of facts but i was like omg when she died cuz for sum reason i felt lyk i could relate... absolutely beautifully written! much luv Sarahh xoxo
girl without wings 2007-10-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is a very interesting piece. I think you could easily put this under poetry instead of fiction, but it works in this category just as well. It might get more of the attention it deserves in poetry, though. Nice work!