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henred5
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Myriad

Originality: Breathe By Jane Ellecot



Best: In the Line of Fire By Musashi
Catseye*Rose
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Myriad

Originality: Macky

Best: Musashi
henred5
2007-10-29
ch 9,
abuseAn interesting little piece...a bit confusing at time buts still interesting and slightly funny.
Washi Chiisai
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseMechanics - Mackey
Originality - Murashi
Overall - BlackCat

I must say, I was laughing very hard through a couple of these :) Great reads, I enjoyed reading them :D
Catseye*Rose
2007-10-28
ch 9,
abuseYay, Canadian spelling! XD Ha, this made me laugh :P
Catseye*Rose
2007-10-28
ch 8,
abuseThat was cute ^_^
Catseye*Rose
2007-10-28
ch 7,
abuseOh, I love her! But for awhile I was thinking she was really mean...but I guess not ^_^ Hm, Maria actually seems like a pretty name for a boy...
Catseye*Rose
2007-10-28
ch 5,
abuseDefinitely the most dramatic way to break up a wedding :P Nice.
Myriadragon
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Chiomi
Originality: Chiomi
Best: Motoko
Myriadragon
2007-10-28
ch 5,
abuseAw!
henred5
2007-10-26
ch 8,
abuseBrilliant story..quite original too.
henred5
2007-10-26
ch 7,
abuse"For the laughs...the laughs you old hag!" henred5 yelled.
Well Personally I might have strnageled the person who would have called me a boy's name like Tommy or something else. But meh. lols
Welp interesting tale, would be tragically funny if it was true.
henred5
2007-10-26
ch 6,
abuselols...awesome story...their all awesome. How am I supposed to choose the best.
But anyway I love the entire plot of this, and the introduction of vampire like beings is awesome. Again truly well done.
henred5
2007-10-26
ch 5,
abuse*reaches for a tissue* Poor Emily...I mean her husband to be is actually in love with her brother. I can hear her heart breaking in 2.
Well it was an interesting story...I'll give you that. I couldn't find any spelling errors or grammar issues so overall bravo.
henred5
2007-10-26
ch 4,
abuseWell I love the idea of character running wild and not listening to the author/writer...aka you. lols
I bet you had fun writing this Myri. Anyway I can't see many mistakes in it and it was VERY original. So well done Myri.
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