I really really superly like this. My one problem with it, though, is that Becca starts, in the first chapter, not liking Wylie at all. And then, in the second chapter, she's squeezing his arm and acting like she really likes him. Although it may have been in her head, it would help to explain it out a little bit.

Otherwise, it's really good.

Good luck in your harvest whatever thing!

Nyeh! I loved it! ... but Becca seems suddenly to like him a lot and their characters are pretty different from the first chapter. Unless of course you had to make it that way for the contest, I dunno. But yeah, loves!

Wow! This is so unbelievably clever... I love it. It's remarkable how much personality you can get across in just a handful of letters. This was very impressive and I can't wait to see the rest. 8D

ni! i loved it! adorable, and this is most definitely going up on my faves... sorry, i'm just ocd about these things, but it's 'havrest' not 'harvet' ... yeah...