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| Chidori Nadare 2007-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseI love this...so creepy and morbid (in a very good way). 'Murderer and murdered-/Even in death they fit together/So nicely, two halves of a whole,': those lines are so amazing, so fitting. The ending is very unexpected. Great poem and keep writing -C.N |
| dress her up in fairytales 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abusethis gave me the creeps ... but in a good way. i really do like this. the ending wasn't what i expected though. |
| heresyisforlosers 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseVery morbid, creepy... But good. I like the last stanza. Two parts of one whole... s.t. |