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| UnhappyPeople 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseLovely work. You hit just the right notes of bittersweet nostalgia and wrote it in a very readable, down-to-earth kind of way. It's a very un-poetic poem, but I mean that in a good way! Again, very nice and bittersweet. |
| Princess-anna57 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuse:) Cool poem. True indeed. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| rust phoenix 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I don't really read things in the school section, but I saw this in Just In and it was amusing. |