Lovely work. You hit just the right notes of bittersweet nostalgia and wrote it in a very readable, down-to-earth kind of way. It's a very un-poetic poem, but I mean that in a good way! Again, very nice and bittersweet.

:) Cool poem. True indeed. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

Interesting. I don't really read things in the school section, but I saw this in Just In and it was amusing.