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| Crysta Mayville 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was great! You would have never known it was your first free verse poem! |
| Ivory Willow 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseThat's a good question. love your images! Beauty is not fun unless you have someone/something to share it with. I just wish more people would like reading poetry. There are way too many poems that don't have reviews but they deserve them. |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI love how it seems to be just about a lotus and the end makes it about so much more The nature imagery and personification was really great One thing the two lines Everyone envies you/You are beautiful.. repeating you seemed off to me... Other than that it was a wonderfully written piece... great job especially for your first try at free verse |
| Ramenluver 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseLovely, dear. I believe this really does have a level of truth to it. -Ramen |
| TylerB 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseHey Loona thanks for the review on one of my older poems! You said you have no idea how to write free verse poetry, but here's the deal, there is no specific way on how to write free verse. I think you did a wonderful job on this one. The flow is right on and its descriptiveness is great. Good job! |
| Little Hobbit 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI like this, it's very well done. I like how you had the short couple of lines in between the longer lines. Good imagery and choice of words, and I like the meaning behind it. Good stuff :) Little Hobbit ^.^ |
| rust phoenix 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abusePretty poem, I like the flow to it and the imagery. It's a bit simplistic, but it's good. |
| xEmoMuffinx 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseIt's good! Except the verses are a bit unbalanced in length. Except the last and first are the same length, and the second and second last are also the same length. Ooh, I sense a pattern. |