Hm... not bad. Kinda reminds me of a poem by Emily Dickinson. Kinda dark, but promising at the same time, I dunno. Keep up the good work, though, and don't ask why I'm even writing this. I just logged onto fictionpress and looked under my favorites from, like, a thousand years ago, so don't get all evil on me.

Boo. Have a happy Halloweeny.