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| A Dreamer in Disguise 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abusethis is really good! i like the meter, it's cool. =] |
| ChicChicChic 2008-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abusefrom you i for the first time got to know abt chokas...and hm what should i say? i m still trying to figure a single accurate meaning out of this one ..everytime i read it i find some another meaning.pls help me out with this one... |
| Mish-mash Carpet 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is very sad...but it seems to me ( I might be wrong) that there is hope in this poem the word knowledge makes me think that love can be learned and is therefor accessable to anyone who may or may not have expirienced it yet. Very good keep writing. |
| View from the Windowsill 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked a lot. I could feel the emotion. It must have been hard to write because of the syllibales |
| The Suicide Nation 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was Beautiful. I could feel emotion in it, and it meant something to me as a person. That is one of the greatest feelings of reading someone's writings. Thank you for writing this. _Vincent, SN |
| Undrahas 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. I liked it. |
| kelloggs256 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, the title I will admit through me off a little but after reading it a few times I began to understand the structure of this Choka (new vocab word). My favorite lines are the last two. I think people critize and loathe even the thought of love without ever really experiencing it. Another great job. |
| shadowcat86 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseI don't really get this one very well... |
| stupidityisnotacrime 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuse'seeked instead of stating its Ugliness from a distance' that was excellent. Keep it Up! |
| Ramza the Heretic 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAgain this one really runs on. It's 'sought' by the way; the past tense of 'seek' is not 'seeked' but 'sought'. =) |
| rira-chan 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abusewow very pretty. i liked it a lot ~rira-chan p.s thanks for your review! |
| Healing.x.Rain 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI've never read a Choka before. . . But, I really enjoyed reading it! |
| Needa S 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI have never heard of a Choka. But it was a great write just the same. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this and will definitely have to try writing a Choka sometime. The ending wraps the entire piece up very nicely and I love the word choice. Well done! Thanks for the review! |
| D. A. Emme 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was rather interesting. I've never heard of a Choka. It's very neat though. And the poem is neat. My interpations is kind of like... hm.. Well, I thought I had something, but I can't quite write it down. It's very unique though. |