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Repmet 2008-04-18 ch 3,	abuseWell my dear, I'm dieing to know what happens. This is by far my favorite story on fanfiction...and one of the few I acutally keep up with! Update soon please!
amber 2008-02-10 ch 3, anon.	abuseEiffel Tower was a really good fic. It would be difficult to match it, but this fic seems to be coming along well. Disliked the first chapter, but the other two made up for it. I have one grouse though. I can't see why Seb & Paris are together. They don't seem to gel as well as they did in the earlier story. You need to work on this. Keep writing. You do have a lot of talent & this story has potential.
isagallagher 2008-01-21 ch 3,	abuseLoving this story, hope you update soon! ;D
sana 2008-01-08 ch 3, anon.	abuseupdate soon please. waiting for the next installment. umm,just visited the site to see if there were any new updates n glanced at the reviews. looks like there was a typo-i've mentioned Eiffel Tower as EF instead of ET. the thing is thats the way i've saved it on my hardrive- the name has stuck i guess. i'm probably liable to use it later too . sorry. happy new year. hope u establish a great relationship with ur muses in 2008.
magalina 2008-01-03 ch 3, anon.	abuseBraelyn?! :o AAh, can`t wait for the next chapter!
sana 2007-12-17 ch 3, anon.	abusefirst of all, thanx 4 starting the sequel. i loved the Eiffel Tower (EF)- u created such adorable characters - Paris being my favourite, of course. loved Seb too. this is coming along well. i didn't like the 1st chapter much-was a bit stiff... but u picked up the flow from the 2nd chapter - in the Eiffel Tower, no matter how superficial the interaction between Seb n Paris might have been, there was always an underlying thread of intimacy n affection - it was one of the things i loved about it - although Paris might be acting like a jerk or Seb as a idiot it was obvious that the boys really cared about each other. that's missing a little in the 1st chapter here - u can't understand why they are together there. but like i said it starts to pick up in the 2nd chapter - Paris' POV was in keeping with the tone of EF. well done. I think Seb's 2nd POV is much better - but I think u can do better - all the best. a bit more stuff about how they interact together, thrown in with a bit of Paris' snarky sense of humour & childishness would make it perfect. the interaction between Paris & Hero was quite well done too. But a bit more about the interaction between the Brien family & S+P would be nice. Hey, how about a one-shot where S+P tell Paris' parents about them. it would be interesting. will their school friends also make an appearance later in the story? - i hope so - u had created good characters- i hope u don't let them go... its good to have the boys S+P back. pl continue the good work.
Aibi 2007-12-12 ch 3,	abusea ha! I'm definitely excited to see why she called him. Well, you know most of us have our own guesses from the last series ;)
magalina 2007-12-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseIt was nice to see Hero again :P And I still adore paris.
I Am The Bunny Slayer 2007-11-26 ch 3,	abuseHoly **.
Aoi Mitsuko 2007-11-24 ch 3,	abuseAh, not a cliff hanger! XD As I always say, they're just too cute, and I can't wait for the next chapter >.> (more Paris? XD)
dreamerdoll-is-2-lazy-2-log... 2007-11-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseI agree iwth Paris' sentiment on the last bit. If the ** is pregnant, i'm going to have a fit. Seriously. Have I mentioned that i love you lately? Briliant, as usual...can't wait for the rest! dreamerdoll
i-see-faeries 2007-11-23 ch 3,	abuseSo you have no idea how happy I was when I saw this, a sequel. The first one is still one of the best stories I've ever read, and I'm holding you up to that expectation for this one! So you better make it good! LOL. JK. I'm not sure how good this is yet, as it's pretty slow right now. A lot of new characters I can't keep straight, but you know, that's okay. I still love you. Update soon!
nonaccount 2007-11-23 ch 3,	abuseDo Paris and Seb keep separate bedrooms in their apartment? "Paris maneuvers me into one of the bedrooms, mine," which brings me to another point, it's kind of odd, or different, how separate they seem to keep their lives. I'm not saying anything negative about it, it seems to work for them, I just find it a little unusual. Why all the space? Funny exchange between the two regarding the "down-there area" "That's cute. Really precious. Really. ** precious." And it is. ;)
Liviania 2007-11-22 ch 3,	abuseI can't hold it back: Dun dun dun. And he still has to give his friends a ride. Also, Hannah scares me a little. ('A little' being a complete lie.) Livi
color-of-her-eyes 2007-11-22 ch 3,	abusewhy does a little phrase like "well, **", sum it up so perfectly? and paris is so paris. I really love him for that (though it would take some time for me to get used to his swear would I ever meet him in real life). so. nice new characters so far. hope well get another chap soon bye

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