|Reviews for Coliseum|
| I Am The Bunny Slayer 11/26/07 . chapter 3
| samalane 11/24/07 . chapter 3
Ah, not a cliff hanger! XD
As I always say, they're just too cute, and I can't wait for the next chapter . (more Paris? XD)
| dreamerdoll-is-2-lazy-2-log-in 11/23/07 . chapter 3
I agree iwth Paris' sentiment on the last bit. If the whore is pregnant, i'm going to have a fit. Seriously.
Have I mentioned that i love you lately? Briliant, as usual...can't wait for the rest!
| i-see-faeries 11/23/07 . chapter 3
So you have no idea how happy I was when I saw this, a sequel. The first one is still one of the best stories I've ever read, and I'm holding you up to that expectation for this one! So you better make it good! LOL. JK. I'm not sure how good this is yet, as it's pretty slow right now. A lot of new characters I can't keep straight, but you know, that's okay. I still love you. Update soon!
| nonaccount 11/23/07 . chapter 3
Do Paris and Seb keep separate bedrooms in their apartment? "Paris maneuvers me into one of the bedrooms, mine," which brings me to another point, it's kind of odd, or different, how separate they seem to keep their lives. I'm not saying anything negative about it, it seems to work for them, I just find it a little unusual. Why all the space?
Funny exchange between the two regarding the "down-there area" "That's cute. Really precious. Really. Fucking precious." And it is. ;)
| Liviania 11/22/07 . chapter 3
I can't hold it back:
Dun dun dun.
And he still has to give his friends a ride. Also, Hannah scares me a little. ('A little' being a complete lie.)
| color-of-her-eyes 11/22/07 . chapter 3
why does a little phrase like "well, fuck", sum it up so perfectly?
and paris is so paris.
I really love him for that (though it would take some time for me to get used to his swear would I ever meet him in real life).
nice new characters so far.
hope well get another chap soon
| Vicci 11/22/07 . chapter 3
Braelyn? What does she want? o_o I guess I'll find out soon considering we're now getting into the storyline xD
| Anaita 11/22/07 . chapter 3
OMG. Loved it. Absolutely loved it. Your narrative, your characters, just everything. Usually I'm quite put off by a multitude of characters because it's so hard to relate and adopt each and every one of them but the way you write them is flawless and given time, the reader comes to accept every single character. I love that about your writing. I almost squeed in the library when I saw you had updated. And such a fast update too. So, thank you. As always, take your time is what I say because as a writer myself (I use the term lightly here .) I know the constraints of time. Well, take care.
| Back of Beyond 11/22/07 . chapter 3
Awesome chapter, and nice cliffhanger too. :] *And I'm chuffed to find out that Pete will be back at some point! xD*
You should probably update soon too, before my mind runs away with me even more. Already, in my head, I've decided Pete and Michael are having a secret affair, and that blonde girl Caleb fancied at the party? Yeah, she's really a guy. ...I get a bit carried away somtimes. xD
Anyway, hope to read more soon. :]
| Kathleen Moon 11/22/07 . chapter 3
fascinating! can't wait for more...is Braelyn pregnant? Is that the problem? and I know that Paris and Seb can stick together no matter what...although Paris could stand to be a little more loving of his boyfriend. I'm surprised Seb can put up with him.
| Anaita 11/20/07 . chapter 2
This was an awesome awesome chapter. I missed Paris' narrative hahaha. I think your writing has always been amazing but with this I can see it has evolved and with Paris too. He's the same self-centered, utterly hilarious guy and yet there is something there that shows just a teeny weeny bit of maturation. Not much, I daresay xD! I love this fic so much
| Back of Beyond 11/18/07 . chapter 2
I'm glad the sequel has arrived, 'cos The Eiffel Tower is definitely in my top 5 stories on fictionpress. It's awesome, I'm re-reading it right now, actually!
Anyway, the sequel's looking good so far. Can't wait for the plot to arrive. :] Just wondering, will Peterabbit be cropping up in this story again? He was my favourite character. :P
| Liviania 11/17/07 . chapter 2
I'm glad my family dinners aren't awkward. There's enough embarrassment going on without awkwardness. But I love how Paris was completely unknowing of the fact that it was his father's b-day and Hero had a bf, when he knew/had been told.
| Vaguely Amused 11/17/07 . chapter 2
I likey... it was just a nice chapter. nothing wrong with filler.