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Miss.Simplicity<33 2008-07-21 ch 38, anon.	abusei totally loved this storyy
caroline 2008-07-14 ch 38, anon.	abuseyour story ws interseting, the only thing that bugged me was sheldon. She was a **, and she never really changed. Like sometimes she would be nice but she was still mean. Highschool these days isn't really like that. i just wish she could have turned into a nice person and the end and realize that some of the things she said we're pretty bitchy. I didn't like her at all. the only time i liked sheldon was when she was around bryce. I love bryce by the way.. Good story though. i stayed up all night reading it.
Channah 2008-07-12 ch 16,	abuseOh my god, I had to laugh when Corrigan's mom embarrassed him. That was so hilarious. LOL I love the friendship between the three of them.
Channah 2008-07-12 ch 6,	abuseSo, I can't help but wonder... Is Bryce flirting with Leisha in front of Sheldon because of what she said to Corrigan last chapter (I think)? Is he testing her if she's one of those girls "that don't mind him being with other girls"? Or is he playing with her just for fun? Anyway, I love this story. It's different from any other high school fanfiction I've read before. :)
Feel The Waltz 2008-07-11 ch 38,	abuseI'm not normally one fore het romance stories but you really sucked me into this one and i thourally enjoyed it. :)
Miss Secret 2008-07-10 ch 38,	abusei think...that this is definitely an interesting story. it's like a miz between a whole new crowd and sentiment lost. more awnc than sl, though. it's a pretty creative plot and i liked it. though, i think this story has a bit too much fluff, if you know what i mean. maybe it's just me and my impatience but sometimes, i don't even read it. i just skim through until there's some dialog or description of movement and stuff like that. in the beginning, i thought that you took awhile to get the ball rolling--like there was too much of introductions and stuff. like the small petty things and crap like that. lol. well, i thought so. like in awnc and sl, things were to the point. this one, well i've already said it, has a bit to much fluff. so yeah. but great job anyway :]
MrFood 2008-07-06 ch 38, anon.	abuseThere are myriads of teenage high school stories out there. Sadly so many of them follow a stereotypical cliche about popularity. The notion that high school is all about popular hierarchy is, i hate to break it to people: wrong. I've been through high school not that long ago. I'd admit that there are some students that are more well known than others. There are no students that are put on a pedestal or shunned as outcasts. They don't treat teachers like crap and get away w/ it. Their lives doesn't revolve around sex and popularity. I skimmed through the first few chapters of your story. I couldn't force myself to read any further. While i admit that you're a good author and there are a few of your story that i really like, such as Sentiment Lost, I don't like this one or sweet lullaby. The bad-** characters aren't very likable and the story isn't very realistic.
Southern Siren 2008-07-03 ch 38,	abuseThat... was... amazing... It's currently 2:49 in the morning where I am, and your story kept me up this late because it's possibly once of the best I've ever read. I swear I turned on Bryce too... it was sad. I really think you should look into getting this published, and being a reader of many, many books from my library in the same area as yours, this is story is flippin fantastic! ... Now time to sleep!
beingmyself 2008-06-30 ch 2,	abuseI like how Shelldon and Bryce are with each other with the whole no need for words.
AJS 2008-06-18 ch 38,	abuseLast night after I finished this, I was really eager to review it. Maybe even this morning, but now I'm just downright tired. Gah. Sorry about that, and sorry for a crappy review in advance. I love this story a lot - perhaps even more than a Whole New Crowd, but definitely at least as much. The trio is amazing. I love them. And honestly, I don't really see why it was such a problem that they were so inseparable. I mean, yeah, sucks for everyone else, but that's the way life is. The way they act together though, you would have thought they'd all been best friends since elementary school though. The twists were really good, but I guess I could never bring myself to fully accept the idea that either Bryce or Corrigan were the actual killers. It definitely couldn't have been Bryce anyways because he was with Sheldon (by the way, love her name) the entire time when that second girl was killed. Whether it was either of them, it just wouldn't make any sense. What was with the whole police thing too, and that officer? Was that just paranoia? And why was Corrigan eventually let out? Anyways, I don't really have much more to say, only that this story is great and amazing and even though I didn't believe the killer would be Corrigan or Bryce, who would have suspected that guy? So crazy. So I guess Bryce & Sheldon figured his leaving out, which is definitely good, because I love them together. I get that Sheldon had trust issues, but what I don't really understand is why she had commitment issues. So how many girls had Bryce really been with? I was actually surprised Sheldon had only been with three guys, because in the beginning you made it out to be like Sheldon lets guys get all over her as often as Bryce let girls hang all over him. Anyways though. Amazing story. Definitely one of the best :) Keep up the great work. I'll definitely be reading more written by you soon ;) -- Alyssa
Racjael 2008-06-17 ch 38, anon.	abuseaww what a good ending. I'm glad Corrigan lived and everything turned out ok.
.J0ana. 2008-06-16 ch 38,	abusei really liked this story. it was so different than anything i have read here. it was really creepy and Marcus scared the ** out of me, but it was a really great mystery. i was actually convinced that Bryce was the killer and that he wanted the make it seen like it was Corrigan, but then i remembered that she already loved him and that he didnt need to be all phsyco.
shhsilence 2008-06-15 ch 38, anon.	abuseWell done- I really enjoyed the whole thing - plot twists and all - The ending was also great ^_^
HARMONY 2008-06-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was a great story, I don't usually do reviews as I never know what to say; sstill don't but thought I would tell you that I really enjoyed this one.
muffins 2008-06-07 ch 19, anon.	abuseYeah I think that most high schools are basically like this... at least I know mine is.

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