Nice story. It was very very cute and adorable. I love the mad scientist woman, and Carmine saying 'Awesome' all the time.

~Rei

Aww, Ayden made me want to eat him. *Looks shifty-eyed* In a nice way, of course. I like docile men. *Cackles* I found this pretty amusing, actually. I think it could be continued. *Why did you leave off with a cliffy, you evil bastard.

Anyway, I shall glomp you, because I visited your LJ and saw a DoumekixWatanuki icon. I happen to *love* DoumekixWatanuki. xD Okay...I've officially creeped you out enough. Peace out!

So, This was funny as hell. I'm not sure if it was your intention or not, but it made me laugh and I loved it. I liked the narration style more than I normally do a first person, and I loved how... cracked out Angel was. In other words, great story.

hey this story is quite cute! haha i like the style of writing its really fresh. nice work

This is a good romance story, too. I kept relating Ayden to the guy that I like, making me want to squeak (I squeak on rare-ish occasions when I'm really x 100 happy, but it seems to happen more often lately. Hmm..) and making my stomache roll over (also happens when I'm happy) (yes, I'm very wierd). I feel kinda sick now though because I just ate two servings of hamburger helper and about ten glasses of cherry punch. Ooh... I think I wanna read it again! Yep. I'm reading it again! ^-^!

It's so funny! =D And sweet! Nice.
(and I sort of didn't understand your end notes... Al-verse? I wouldn't mind reading another fic with those characters. =P )

aww, that was so adorable...lovely really. Thanks a bunch posting it!