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Hollie Trust 2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Another great poem!

I just wish my computer wouldn't make those stupid spaces between lines...Anyway, great job.

"You wonder, “Could this have been…”
and you catch yourself
to save the pain of pointless hypotheticals."

That was probably my favorite line.

Keep writing!
~Mila
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