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| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-05-04 ch 8,  | abuseThis story is just so funny, and the characters are funny, and just... yeah. The spacing on the last chapter was messed up, but your grammer improved, like, a thousand percent. Update soon! ... And I want Barb to have a little romance... |
| lilhelplessaznwithabigheart 2008-04-23 ch 8, | abuser u alrite after breaking up nand going through al those tough stuff? about ur new story, i would love to read it! me too! i like using z's better than s's for some strange reason. maybe tats just me, tehes. =] now its time for my review... it must hve been hard for izzy to go through all tat guys, and well, craziness. lols anyways, love rhis story, continuing updating! hehes, yup im selfish tat way wen it comes to good stories. lols btw, hope u figure out ur situations soon! i'll always be there to support u, like any other friend would. =) *gives u a big friendship hug =]* |
| jenjen-0 2008-04-20 ch 8, | abuseI really love your story, but you should definitely think about getting either a beta reader or maybe proof reading again. Loved the chapter!! |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-04-18 ch 8, | abuseUPDATE ASAP! |
| dontneedyou 2008-04-17 ch 8, | abuseI really like it. You do have quite a few mistakes though. Maybe proof read it a bit more, huh? Or I could edit it for you, if you want. Just let me know. :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Cami 2008-01-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseA pesar de que no me contestaste mis TRECE llamadas a tu celular y que encima de eso hace como 890457389458934 años q no te veo QUERES Q TE DEJE UN REVIEW LARGO, o sea, PARA! te cuento qeu a Kill lo violo (nada mas eh?) y que la chica esa q creaste es no se rara y por eso me copa. Que raro vos haciendo personajes raros jajaja. te quiero y espero el proximo ah y a mit mb me gusta Kill y mucho eh! espero que lo sepa eh! y nada mas chau hasta las 6 de la tarde cuando te llame. Te quiero! |
| lilhelplessaznwithabigheart 2007-12-30 ch 7, | abusewow...this story rocks merry christmas to you too(although its kinda late) but happy new year at least! hehes xD great story! luv it continue to update...we |
| letsuseswords 2007-12-27 ch 7, | abuseHELO. This is such a cute story! I like it a lot, so please update. It would be better though if you fixed all your spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, you know, you tend to put ed at the end of a word when its not needed. Overall, great story! I love it! PLEASE UPDATE! |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2007-12-27 ch 7, | abuseYAY! A HAMBURGER WITH EXTRE CHEEZE! yeah, this chappie isn't the best, lots of mistakes, but you know, its still good x) |
| brokenxlovelies 2007-12-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseYAY! More Kill! Though Athan is hawt, I love Kill; he's so sweet. Update more! You out-did yourself on this chapter, gimme more ;P |
| maviii 2007-12-27 ch 7, anon. | abuselu me encanta seguii asi :) te super quiero veni a la cmianta zombiee con uss! lovee!! |
| jenjen-0 2007-12-27 ch 7, | abuseGood chapter! You had quite a lot of grammar mistakes, and some forgotten letters though. Can't wait to meet the friends! |
| NaughtySnowWhite 2007-12-17 ch 5, | abuseOh, it's been a lot since I last rred you, honey, but that was no t only because I was accupied with Uni, but also becauso you were planning your life with your soon-to-be-husband Alex, my bro. I loved this, you know it, I know you do. I wanted to rr the next chapter, but you don´t let me (I explained to you later). You are the best!! And Kill is hot! And Athan give me bad thoughts, I can´t help but noticed a likeness with Alexis here? You tell me. LOVE FROM THE BEST NSW |
| brokenxlovelies 2007-12-14 ch 6, | abusePlease, update soon! Your story is... amazing. I want to know what happens with Izzy and Jonathan/Izzy and Kill. Though... I really hope she goes with Kill, he's so.. into her, Jonathan would be a player I'm guessing. But yeah, I love it! Go go, write more! lol |
| lilhelplessaznwithabigheart 2007-12-13 ch 6, | abuseso good! keep on going! will izzy end up with athan or kill? |