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Reviews For: Do You Love Me?
Saku 2007-10-09 . chapter 1
Awesome poem! It was just so sad to read, diffantly one that would speak to the heart. A heart break poem for sure, and I'm sure it tells exactly what the co-worker is feeling. Beautiful piece!

~Saku~
PseudoHanyou 2007-10-09 . chapter 1
I liked it except for:

And now I hear your back with him

*your should be you're*

I truest you

*truest should be trust, but I trust that was just a typo*

All in all, it was a good angsty piece.
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