I love the third line a lot.. and the ending

The last two lines added something to the poem. It confuses me but it also gives a feeling of reassurance. Great job!

-C.N

okay, i love this. it's very well spoken... and the emphasis on the last two lines makes it all the more meaningful. wonderful work!

I really love this. The whole poem flows really well and I especially love the last two lines, very poignant. =)