|Reviews for When I'm dead|
| AnneGirl15 2/19/08 . chapter 1
When you are dead you will either go to heaven or hell, thats the truth. Please don't let yourself go to hell. It's a terrible place. God loves you and he wants you. Except the gift of salvation...it will change your life, trust me! Anne P.S. Thanks for the review!
| Twilight Starr 10/22/07 . chapter 1
| AuraBorealis 10/18/07 . chapter 1
| lyl 10/10/07 . chapter 1
I liked it, it had a nice concept to it- "I renounced to be the fairy tale's princess." But you could probably have used "refused" or another word instead of "renounced" because it can't be used with "to be", I don't think.
And where you say "with no doubt, that someone would be you always you", you need a comma between "you" and "always you".
Other than that, I really think your grammer is improving. Great job! :)
| Slightly Bruised And Broken 10/9/07 . chapter 1
this is freaking awesome! i love it. i could picture a classic romance movie playing in my head. i think you should make it into a story and see what happens.