Basically same review. Kind of unrealistic at least some of the parts. How he kissed her knuckles and she put her lips to the nape of his neck. If you just met the guy your not going to do that. Although he sounds perfect and I dont think many girls would mind doing that to him ;)

I like the story. You have good detail. Some of it is kind of unrealistic though. The whole orphan thing is kind of a stretch to me and how she doesnt even know this Cody but she goes with him and stuff. But, some girls would probably do that lol. Please read my story and review- =D. I'll be waiting for more from you =)

gimme the next chapter!
grr.
i wantt it =[

Great start to the story... can't wait to read more

Cheers
Michelle

something doesnt make sense here darling. this girl meets a stranger who just happens to know her name and offers her a ride home. then he asks her to a party when they dont even know eachother? he somehow knows where her house is. most normal girls would avoid a boy like that. talk about a stalker. i know this is a fictional character but come on. any girl who goes to a party with weird stalker type of guy is just asking for trouble.

Shweet. Not that it was bad before, but sometimes its fun when stories are re-written... can't wait to read it all over again! lol. Good luck! (re-writing I mean). :-)

Super good storie! Im about to read the second one!

WOW you should make this into a book but just add a little more detail to it.

little confusing, but that might be cause i'm tired and listening to really loud distracting music. the end part about leaving and motorcycles and cars was really kinda confusing, but other than that, good chappy!

woah woah woah. crazy. anton just totally turned cury into a vampy!

Interesting ending...send me a reply with the title for the sequel please!

Ah! Let me know when the sequel is! Cliffhanger! I HATE cliffhangers, as much as I respect the purpose of them :)
cruel, cruel world!
Loved it by the way. There are some grammatical errors that bug me b/c I'm just like that, but the content rocks!
Write that sequel soon!

OMIGOSH!! NO way! So wait, did Anton kill her or what? Haha I was like, wow! Haha, get that sequel up soon!! Love it!

wow. that's such an intense cliffhanger. please post a sequel soon (:

i love it. keep going.

Wait what?!?!?! This is the end? How so? You just created a cliff hanger and well, left us hanging! I want to know what it going to happen. Why he bit her!