That's so true.

I should know, I'm a grade-A dork who's exactly like that, only I'm even less clueless.

Really nice, touching even, and I love your conclusion. Conclusions are hard to write for me, and yet you've done it so prettily. Nice.

good work.

That was good!

There's just one thing: "A self-proclaimed hermit." Is that you by any chance? XD

No, but seriously, that was good. You kinda went a bit too far with the whole 'atom and molecule' thing but maybe thats just cause i hate Bio. LOL

Write more stories.

Or else.

Good job.

Golden Sapphire

Awesome story.

Good job!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

Have a wonderful day.

Twilight Starr

Simply excellent! It feels like you're talking to me which makes no sense but oh well :) It's like you become the character and feel all these things, makes you think. End was very nice, yet reading the last line alone does not give the desired effect I think. Still, amazing job!

:D I LIKED IT