You're really good at this whole song-writing business, aren't you? I wouldn't be surprised if you did music for them all and everything.

The thing which I like about your work is that it's just genuinely better than everybody else's. So much imagery, and no pathetic rhyme schemes to constrain it.

How many people have I met who think poetry is abot rhyming? Too many, that's what. I'm not saying that rhyme is a bad thing by the way, but most people are really bad at using them and so it's incredibly pleasing.

Keep up the great work.

Good poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day.

Twilight Starr