|Reviews for Pawn Takes King|
| Vexed and Tired 10/10/07 . chapter 1
You're really good at this whole song-writing business, aren't you? I wouldn't be surprised if you did music for them all and everything.
The thing which I like about your work is that it's just genuinely better than everybody else's. So much imagery, and no pathetic rhyme schemes to constrain it.
How many people have I met who think poetry is abot rhyming? Too many, that's what. I'm not saying that rhyme is a bad thing by the way, but most people are really bad at using them and so it's incredibly pleasing.
Keep up the great work.
| Twilight Starr 10/9/07 . chapter 1
Good luck with poetry and life.
Have a wonderful day.