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| Vexed and Tired 2007-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseYou're really good at this whole song-writing business, aren't you? I wouldn't be surprised if you did music for them all and everything. The thing which I like about your work is that it's just genuinely better than everybody else's. So much imagery, and no pathetic rhyme schemes to constrain it. How many people have I met who think poetry is abot rhyming? Too many, that's what. I'm not saying that rhyme is a bad thing by the way, but most people are really bad at using them and so it's incredibly pleasing. Keep up the great work. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseGood poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |