Ahaha, best dialogue ever. Jack is amazing xD

Lol. I love the ending. the whole time I thought he was the older best friend of the sister that was taking advantage of the younger innocent brother. The end clears it up and makes it funny. I liked it.

Oh mah lawd. You're funny. ;P

Lol. >_> Cute.

Hahaha. :) That was the best ending ever.

xD That was a surprise ending. How cute though. xD

;-; Why is EVERYONE better at writing sex than I am? xDD

This was so cute and fun. xD It made me lol a lot. :P I loved Jack. And I love that name. Crazy. :O

xo

Oh, a surprise ending - neat-o! I love this oneshot. I liked the humor in it. Poor Kyle having to deal with a stoned, inattentive and then horny boyfriend. Kyle seems too level-headed to have Jack for a boyfriend, but I like their odd dynamic. Very sweet. :)

God, I so needed this right now - France lost the rugby game against England (and I'm actually *in* England) and so my French friends are depressed. I couldn't care less bout the game, but the mood isn't good. Thanks for posting it - and for me ! Yay !!

That was cute. And funny. I like how there's no description of the characters, and that it goes straight to the point. Short, but I really liked it.

I'm so totally trying to always post a 100th review for your stories :)

that is funny you could definitly go somewhere with this. was this the onw shot you said you were suposed to be posting in the near future? well it is great can't wait for updates. =D



Yours truly Blade-of-Sorrow

Oh god! So they *were* going out!

LOVELY ENDING!

Gosh I was just being stupid.

Well you already know how much I love this.

Lots.