Really interesting and original, I wish Jurah didn't have to die though.

Your story line is predictable and rushed. You need to develop your characters and plot slowly. Don't rush. And try not to go for what other stories are like. Your main idea is original. But honestly the whole powers thing is a bit much. Keep to the basics from the beginning. Also you stepped out of character a few times. Really try to concentrate on each character as separate entities, different voices in your head as you write. It might help.

I KNEW SHE'D TELL! :]

Saeron hd better win! Jurah seems... kinda... vile to me! I don't know...

~Faerie

can't wait! =]

Wow1 I really love this There are no words to describe it
Please continue this I beg of you please!
This is far to good to resist not reading lol :D

this story is excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work.

I loved this story. I've been reading it the pass few days and feel in love with it. I liked Saeron a lot. I also really like your color choose for the tigers. Black fur with white stripes and so on. Very cerative. I was sad after reading Jurah dieth, I like him when he didn't have an ego. I can't wait to read the book in your series.

i loved your story, its so original and imaginative. wonderful plot and character development. when i first started this story, i thought it'd be a beauty and the beast story.. but its turned out to be much more. everytime i thought i had the story figured out, another twist would jump around the corner and surprise me.

suggestions, hmm lemme think.. well i think the characters should mature more as their story continues, because sometimes they still sound like children, but with the responsibility of adults. nothing a bit of character development cant fill in. and don't be afraid to slow down and describe things/ideas/events in more detail.

i really enjoyed reading this story, i'd say its one of the most creative fics i've ever read on fictionpress. keep up the great work! =)

What's the next one going to be like? *pouts*

that was an interesting ending. perfect set up for a sequel. i am intrigued to what the sequel will be. can't wait!

WO! IT FINISHED!! YAY! now. you MUST MUST MUUST write secretly your #1 fan. you must. ^^ cos. it sounds really good so far. and i want to read it. heh.
i usaully dont read sequels. but i might for Saren's Temple. might.
but anyway. start secretly your #1 fan ASAP! ^^ please. lol

I really enjoyed reading this story and will definately read the sequel.
You did a great job on this and there is no doubt that you will continue to do so with the sequel.

love the story
cant wait for more

What?? WHAT?? You had me all preped up for something a little more... graphic. XD that's just how you set it up though... XDXDXD

haha, i'm curious, i wanna know what's in it!