lol. this is a really good story, in fact, if u hadnt said anything about it being for skool, i probly wouldnt have guessed. like i said, its good, really good. may grace b with u

I really enjoyed this!

I just wanted to let you know that this is Rowan from "All Alone With Her Thoughts" and that I moved to this account. Now that you know that, I want to appologize for not reviewing you in such a long time. Sorry!

Rowan.

Hello Rain.
Anyway, I'll skip the crazy stuff and get right to the point. I actually liked this story, even though it isn't a sci-fi or a fantasy. It sounded good all around, I saw no mistakes that my computer didn't automatically correct, and nothing I would have changed. Can't tell if this is fiction or non, really, you did good.
If I were the teacher, I'd give you a hundred. But...that's why I'm not the teacher. Speaking of which, no time for character reviews, I have to get ready for school.