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| Silencia 2007-12-05 ch 8,  | abuseI just read part of your story and it included part of the song I mentioned earlier, hihi my bad, but I really like your style of writing! its open and really like the thoughts of a teenage girl, you have talent! |
| Silencia 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusedo you know there is a song called big girls dont cry? well its a great song gotta listen to it (I havent read the story yet, well I gotta go and read ;) ) |
| Misplaced Angel 2007-11-29 ch 10, | abusehi, i just finished reading your story and while i really like it( you have a good idea) i cant help but think that you rushed through it. you didnt include shayne's feelings or christy's feelings or just didnt project the drama which is usually high when someone breaks up with a boyfriend of 4 years. dont get me wrong but ... it seamed like a little rushed. dont take offense but thats how it struck me. Angel |
| the big crunch 2007-11-16 ch 10, | abuseit's the END? grr. no! |
| GENquerida- 2007-11-16 ch 10, | abuseHEEY! I LOVE THE ENDING! :D it's really cool, this story's like a movie production or something. and then at the end of the movie the girl says out her reflection (that last bit) and then the credits roll. anyway, ITS SO COOL. love yah. :D |
| the big crunch 2007-11-13 ch 9, | abuseah! i love it. :) more! |
| the big crunch 2007-11-12 ch 8, | abusehahaha. it's fine, theres plenty of dee-tails. haha, but great chap. cant wait for more! |
| GENquerida- 2007-11-12 ch 8, | abusehey, :D you're good. it's really simple, yet detailed, and it's very realistic. i'll feel the same way if i were in Darcee's shoes. anw, ima go tell my friends about this story. i understand how one can be yearning soo soo much for reviews. i made my buddies review mine. LOL. i was hoping you could review mine, too. :D anyway, keep it up. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE. :D |
| the big crunch 2007-11-06 ch 7, | abusehahaha. yeah. its really good. and pretty detailed. and im a sucker for lots of detail.hahahaha. yea, thougj |
| the big crunch 2007-11-04 ch 6, | abuselove. ) more? |