Aww this was so sweet, it really touched me...Yes we may seem fine on the outside and try not to be sappy romantics, But i think every girl waits for that special someone to sweep her of her feet! :P Good story, Keep writing more stories :DD

I feel that this story is kinda abstract compared to those that I usually read on FP. Nevertheless, it is very, very enjoyable, and the chemistry between the characters is great.

Well done, again! Pure emotional amazingness and more metephorical soul-speeches! =D

OMGOMGOMGOMG! (that was me venting my exasperation - or not really exasperation, kind of, not really...) Uh. You must be so excited! Year 12!! LUCKY!

Ok omfg!! That was absolutely WOW! I mean, I totally wish it was me, so yeh.
Did you win?
You should have of course.
If I was the judges, you would have won.
xx
bella.

aw

Aw, so cute! :D I LOVE this! (favingg!)

i like this. it's not obnoxiously cheesy and fluffy (like all of my stories, heheh)but it's still very sweet.

it's cute. i love it.

i loved the sentiment of 'will you catch me...'. it was really well written!

i like this one-short! kinda bittersweet!

Cuute :) Love the ending!
-Aria

aw how cute!! =)

It's definitely cliche, and she's very lucky he was there when he was, but it was well-written and I like it. (: I'm glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:

Sigh, the feeling of being inferior... That's sad... sigh... but I enjoyed the ending when the guy came out of the blue and saved her, it was so cool!! -sighs dreamily-

very short, very sweet. love it!

Aww...this left me feeling warm and fuzzy...