|Reviews for The Sun And The Rain|
| Chromium Dragon 10/10/07 . chapter 1
"The decent had to be perfect, the combination of anti gravity pockets and reapplication of gravity had to buffet the bench in the right way for it to do anything more than just float in the general direction I was guiding it." -Decent? Is that the word you meant to use?
Also, how can he have feelings for the guy if he's never really even been close to him? Or talked to him?
And... You spent WAY too much detail explaining what he was doing with the bench. x_x Sorry, but that was kinda boring, I didn't care what it took to do it, just that he did it.
Other than that? It's cute. :3