oh. wow. that was brilliant.

Watch the typos.

i love this baby.

i want to read more about these girls.

you're bloody brilliant.

I love this. Love your sentence structure, your wording, and your descriptions. You've captured the sense with urgency and greedy desire with a level of believability and accuracy. Well done.

does this mean a lot to you? it sounds like it's from your heart and i admire that. looking forward to more

Very powerful. I enjoyed the structure and really felt the emotions.

Wow! I love this. It's amazing!

That other anonymous person was incredibly bitchy.

This is really good prose.

Cheers.

if i met you, i wouldn't like you. it sounds like you need a reality check and a shirt that says "NARCISSIST".