|Reviews for Born to be Reborn thoughts|
| AK the Twilight 6/13/08 . chapter 1
I liked how this story was told. The prose worked well in its format and the story itself was pretty fantastic and interesting because of it. You definitely need to pay attention to grammar mistakes, and while I'm not a big fan of telling people this, don't forget the punctuation, especially in the italicized part near the end. It made it a bit difficult to follow.
I also didn't feel a real connection between the girl and her wing. It seemed to be resolved too quickly. It it, however, very easy to see her relationship with the man. It's quite heartfelt, like a father-figure. This was a cool read, though you need to pay attention to punctuation. Overall, great job.
| Twilight Starr 10/22/07 . chapter 1
Cute poem. It was so sweet.
| AuraBorealis 10/18/07 . chapter 1
| Surfing Dog 10/10/07 . chapter 1
Different. Very different, but in a good way of course. It's unique, refreshing, and I enjoyed it. Keep writing dear writer.