Fantastic.

I have to agree with...The Blind Guardian Remy. You certainly have evoked the same feeling you get when you read a great poet's poem.

This is probably one of the best poems to touch my eyes.

Joah.

Good stuff! I think this poem embodies the elation that discovering meaning behind another's words can bring. It is a good feeling when you suddenly realize that there is meaning in something that previously seemed to hold little.

As for the style, there are a few type-Os. One like "seriously, I'm think ..." well ... enough said I guess, right?

Overall, good poem.

By the way, you should really finish that Crossing Guard story. I think that one definately had potential, too. Good to see you writing something again, though why the email came from I don't know.

Remy