Reviews for Brown Eyes Don't Cry

Guardrail 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abuseThe third stanza is so great! Well the whole poem is of course, but that part really struck me. The end was a bit repetative, but no matter. Awesome poem, this one is one of your better ones I think. Keep writing!
Tytherpol 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abusei love the tone of this. and the repetition plays at the right places. the first stanza has the strongest imagery, but the third stanza is awesome. nice job.