Reviews for Eat While It's Still Healthy

Twilight Starr 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abuseAmusing, little piece. It seems like everything has a risk of killing us these days and almost everything causes cancer. ~Twilight Starr~
Fast Food Fantasy 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem, it's a great commentary on our changing definition of healthy. The only thing I might change would be the last line, to something maybe like "While it will not kill me", "Before it kills me", or "While it won't bring death to me" (
Jeannie-Redd 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abuseGood poem, I like how you poke fun at how "what's healthy to eat" is always changing. It's funny. Good job. ~Jeannie-Redd
Gemma Lovell 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abuseThat's so cute! Grammatically speaking there's an alternate to "While it's still healthy", but it goes with your title. Nice job! Love, Gem