Wow...and WOW.
I love your writing.You have no idea how long i have been looking for good romance stories with a historical background..and i have found them! I can't find any flaws...please keep it up!! your characters are so rich and your story so insightful...thank you for writing it!

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! AS EXPECTED!

Major aw! I love this confession scene; it's so damned sweet and romantic and now I feel incredibly jealous. Great job!!

I think I like this story the best of all those you've written that I've read so far and it's because the main characters, Grey and Maggie, seem most human. They have flaws ones that end up featuring quite prominently in the story, it makes them so much more believable and they're much easier to relate to. I do wish you'd gone into how each set of parents reacted to the engagement and marriage though, and who is this Ben character petunia's married and whatever happened to Annie? The transition between the wedding chapter and the chapter after it was rough and left much to be desired.

Ah, I love their kids' names! And I've finally decided Grey is cool. Cool enough to deserve Maggie that is! Lovely story.

Go Maggie! He, he, I love that girl!

Also, I actually started really liking Jack Benedict and was hoping she could team up with him instead of Grey. I was so shocked to find they were the same person!! Now I'm all confused. I suppose Grey is better now. He is . . .he is. And I'm certainly glad that Maggie is being so stubborn.

So, I've finally gotten around to reading this story! I fell in love with Maggie immediately. I'm actually attracted to spoiled rich girls, weird isn't. And she wasn't ever mean, that I saw, only heard, only shallow. I loved how she's changed, she's just an innocent child. And I love Sara!! So cute.

Grey. Frankly I can't stand the fellow. His mother is a dear, and he may be kind, but he sure is judgmental. And he's a doctor who smokes! That never made sense to me. I guess they did that back then...but still. Weird, I actually don't like the main guy, especially the way he and his friends mock Maggie when they don't even know her! Humph. I like Teddy, he's sensible.

Ah, well, I hope my opinion of our hero will change. Maggie is a doll, so is Mrs. Mansfield, and Sara.

Aw, I really enjoy Grey! He's a fantastic character, I can already tell! And I like Maggie's little Scarlett O'Hara-esque qulaity about her :) you're such a lovely writer! My favorite of your stories was the Lilli/Sam. It just melted me! I hope I can be as good as a writer someday! :)

hiya

great story, i really enjoyed reading it. A great read. I didn't find any errors or any other problems. The chapters flow well together and very detailed. You feel like you are actually there, which is a great way to write a book.

Thank you for writing this masterpiece.

Angel

So, a few things:
I enjoyed this story a lot. I love WWI movies, books, etc., but there were some things that bothered me.
First, penicillin wasn't invented until 1940.
Second, speaking as a nurse, it is very frustrating to watch my coworkers ignore their own needs because they are "too busy" to use the bathroom or eat something. This is not noble; it is stupid. It is unhealthy. How can someone who doesn't even take care of themselves take care of others? So it bothered me that Maggie was always ignoring her own needs (like food and sleep), and that you made that out to be a good thing. Really, those habits will just lead to mistakes that could lost lives, and ultimately burnout. So please don't glorify it.
Other than that, I think it just reads to run through spellcheck, and I really did enjoy it a lot. :)

I love this! It tugs your heartstrings through the whole story. I really do hop someday you plan on writing novels for I would definately enjoy them for you are a gifted writer!

It's amazing how much Maggie has changed in 18 chapters! Yet, somehow still realistic. For example, the way she was ready to serve wounded soldiers but still didn't know how to make her bed...
I am definitely reading more!

WOW, I have to say out of all the hundreds of stories I have read this story is my favorite next to the "Deceptive Vow" which is amazing as well!

These stories are just WOW !!

I give this story 2 thumbs up! (And 5 stars!) I just read this entire story, all 35 chapters, while at work today and let me just say, it was AWESOME! Maggie's change is incredible and truly had to be done in order for Grey to fall in love with her. This was the first story by Leenaelle I have read and I can't wait to read all the others!

I can't read anymore right now, because well I should probably do homework or something productive...but I'm getting really into your story now so I might actually keep reading more instead...but I just wanted to leave a review incase I didn't.
Grey is adorable!!...and the developing your characters really well done, Maggie is changing but the change is going to take time...for Grey as well, because it will take him awhile to warm up to Maggie. I always get anxious to hop right into the plot (as you know), so I give props to anyone you is willing to take the time in developing it...
I get the feeling that Grey used to have a bit of a love interest for Maggie back in the day...but idk could be wrong...I just get this feeling...I guess I'll find out in the next chapters. :)