aww that's it?? i do agree it is kind of confusing. there isn't much going on but i liked the idea of it. Where the girl comforts the guy in his troubles and not the other way around. :D

one more tally for the chart titled,"angela and her awesome love stories"..=D

this is a very sweet and romantic story. i would've cried if there was more to it :] it was very sweet though!

Aww!
I think it was good how you didn't give much information about the characters. I don't know how to explain it, but it just makes the story better, and gives a feeling of mystery.

aww ;] its sucha cute story haha :] and from that story thats how two characters bonded

woahs this was an awesome one shot. The time when he cried made me reali sad..i reali felt it in my heart wen he let out his years of pain. i love the ending ;] tat made me smile =)

so far i love both of your stories so much
although this one is short, it's amazing and you have a wonderful talent...hoping you'll continue writing more (p.s. suscribe to my C2)

wow... this is what spanish brings out of you?!! i mite just have to start speaking espanol o tu. (con acento sobre o y u y wavy thing sobre n)

BOO?! hey... new story, new plot= I LUV IT! w00t! more. yea yea i noe. this is supposed to b a oneshot. but u noe wat, it was a good one! keep writing more pl0x. u noe u luv me, lisakiwi >=] can't wait for ur next story, bye 'til then.

I think it is quite confusing only at the part he starts kissing her and walking out of a park. xD Otherwise, I thought the emotions were right there, and there are some points I could relate to the boy in your story. I'll fave this.

I really liked your story. I didn't think it was confusing at all. I know you only intended for this to be a oneshot I think it would be really cool to know more about the characters. Keep writing!

It was romantic and really cute! ^^