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| ValJoy 2008-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseone more tally for the chart titled,"angela and her awesome love stories"..=D |
| Carmen Mui 2008-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a very sweet and romantic story. i would've cried if there was more to it :] it was very sweet though! |
| starlit x sky 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseAww! I think it was good how you didn't give much information about the characters. I don't know how to explain it, but it just makes the story better, and gives a feeling of mystery. |
| Jenny :]] 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww ;] its sucha cute story haha :] and from that story thats how two characters bonded |
| OMgosh its mee 2007-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abusewoahs this was an awesome one shot. The time when he cried made me reali sad..i reali felt it in my heart wen he let out his years of pain. i love the ending ;] tat made me smile =) |
| Ruh 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseso far i love both of your stories so much although this one is short, it's amazing and you have a wonderful talent...hoping you'll continue writing more (p.s. suscribe to my C2) |
| It's not always easy 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abusewow... this is what spanish brings out of you?!! i mite just have to start speaking espanol o tu. (con acento sobre o y u y wavy thing sobre n) |
| LisaKiwi >=] 2007-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseBOO?! hey... new story, new plot= I LUV IT! w00t! more. yea yea i noe. this is supposed to b a oneshot. but u noe wat, it was a good one! keep writing more pl0x. u noe u luv me, lisakiwi >=] can't wait for ur next story, bye 'til then. |
| emiray 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI think it is quite confusing only at the part he starts kissing her and walking out of a park. xD Otherwise, I thought the emotions were right there, and there are some points I could relate to the boy in your story. I'll fave this. |
| Zemira 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI really liked your story. I didn't think it was confusing at all. I know you only intended for this to be a oneshot I think it would be really cool to know more about the characters. Keep writing! |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseIt was romantic and really cute! ^^ |