Reviews for Candle in the Rain

Nirvanic Panic 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseholy shirt n pantz, kristen, you're so emo... but it was great, I Am Your Shadow is still the best one methinks ~NP
Memoirs of a Demon Angel 2007-10-23 ch 1,	abuseEl coolio Kristen ^^ Your poems are so much more deep than mine...anyway this is a cool poem!
Thomicas 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abusePretty cute. Though it seems a little forced and choppy I think. I feel like you are holding something back, and you release it only on the last couple of lines ("You disappear/And you have yet to reappear/Leaving only the memory to hold dear", those are great lines). You know what I mean? I miss a little more emotion in your poem, and something to make it float better. It is very choppy: "You stay at my side You have got my hand" - for example. Otherwise; great work! Keep it up! ~Thomas