Beautiful. There are no other words. It is simply splendid xD

I loved the imagery here. Impeccable choice of vocabulary. I love how you made it into a sonnet, giving it a soothing feel to a rather macabre subject (in my opinion). Though I must say, I am not entirely comfortable with the structure, as it seems, a wee bit displaced. Well, that's just me. Outta time, will review more after my exams. Keep writing. That large amount of works that I haven't read yet excites me, so make more! Haha.

It's a very interesting poem, and the style that it is written in is very interesting as well.

Putting it in the point of view of a character was a good way to do this poem. I am unable to really understand the true depth of this poem, but it was amazing as I read it :)

Oh my god it's a sonnet! It's beautiful! I could never, ever, ever in a million years write a sonnet. It flows so perfectly. Favorite lines: "Asphyxiated...by a morbid thought" and "An echo slung across me that will last." I loved the ending.