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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. There are no other words. It is simply splendid xD |
| Thenardier 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI loved the imagery here. Impeccable choice of vocabulary. I love how you made it into a sonnet, giving it a soothing feel to a rather macabre subject (in my opinion). Though I must say, I am not entirely comfortable with the structure, as it seems, a wee bit displaced. Well, that's just me. Outta time, will review more after my exams. Keep writing. That large amount of works that I haven't read yet excites me, so make more! Haha. |
| Kusje 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseIt's a very interesting poem, and the style that it is written in is very interesting as well. Putting it in the point of view of a character was a good way to do this poem. I am unable to really understand the true depth of this poem, but it was amazing as I read it :) |
| tearing hands 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseOh my god it's a sonnet! It's beautiful! I could never, ever, ever in a million years write a sonnet. It flows so perfectly. Favorite lines: "Asphyxiated...by a morbid thought" and "An echo slung across me that will last." I loved the ending. |