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Blissfully Sarcastic
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abuseWhoa. That poem goes fast.
I love it.
Kind of hard to follow, but the whole thing is just...
Suspenseful, I believe that's the word I'm looking for.
ladygirl1324
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abusewhoa. u got my heart beating on this one. i could imagine this being put to music, getting faster, faster, rhythmic. amazing. i wish i could write this kind of stuff. T-T
good job :)
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