wow. amazing detail!

u suck losar just give up riting FOREEVER

SAM!

This story is pure genius. I felt like I was part of it and you left me on edge. I really enjoyed the plot and descriptions. You should really consider a career in this.

I like it. I'll watch it, I wanna see where its gonna go. Are we gonna meet more 'special people?'

If you turned this into a novel, I'd buy it. I am usually a horror or fantasy reader, but I hung on your every word here. This story was so good, I dreaded reading the the last sentence. You writing of the fight sequences was flawless. I saw it all happen, as if I were in a booth witnessing it for myself. Welcome to my favorites. PLEASE continue...

dam, ur good. your ocabulary is expertice and your description os above average. Im liking the story and the feel of it. so much was seen in such a small chapter. ill keep reading if u keep updating.