 KingdomRain 2007-10-11 . chapter 1lol, kinda creepy in a way, but i like it! i really liked the ashes to ashes, dust to dust. The imagery was great, kinda makes me wonder what these little beasties are... O_o...
But all in all i liked this poem, and for someone who doesnt write poems very often, its really pretty good.
-Rain- |