the poem is really great, i really liked how you wrtten it

woww.i realy like it. :]

Very good imagery :)

Spooky's right. I like it though. It's a neat idea. Very vivid. :D

lol, kinda creepy in a way, but i like it! i really liked the ashes to ashes, dust to dust. The imagery was great, kinda makes me wonder what these little beasties are... O_o...

But all in all i liked this poem, and for someone who doesnt write poems very often, its really pretty good.

-Rain-